24/08/2012

first summer rain
forecast but not yet falling
and yet…

sunlit dust
how much more skin
will I shed?

birthday party
a woman’s toe pokes out from
her high heeled shoe

winters end
saying goodbye to friends
as I leave the party

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About El Norto

I write haiku. This is my haiku journal.
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2 Responses to 24/08/2012

  1. gnunn says:

    a sublime series Lyndon,

    • El Norto says:

      Really?! Thanks Graham! I’m still stuck on haiku, but getting a grasp on tanka. Your new collection is excellent! Grabbed a copy from collected works, mere hours after you dropped it off!

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