haiku three zero two

Hello all!
The first haiku has turned out like an Issa haiku, well I think so, although I didn’t write it with that intention. The second haiku is more of a dad joke than a haiku, just thought I’d throw it in for fun!

night rubbish duty
they seem to be having fun
these ants

the smell
of defeat
dirty socks

Thanks for reading!


About El Norto

I write haiku. This is my haiku journal.
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3 Responses to haiku three zero two

  1. Like the Issa-like ‘ku a lot.
    Been reading on the e-mails, and should have shown my appreciation sooner – enjoying your haiku a lot, Bear.

    • Haiku bear says:

      Thank you so much! It’s ok that you haven’t commented, I hardly comment on others, even though I enjoy them on email as well. Well as ever thanks for reading!

  2. Steven Myers says:

    the fun of ants. a pheromoning buddha belly laugh.

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