haiku two seven zero.

Hello all!

These are the same haiku, I just couldn’t decide which one was the best. I played around with it a bit, results are for you to judge.

from the sky

the colour fades

a crow calls

in the sky

the colour dissolves

a crow calls

in the sky

the colour fades

a crow calls

colour fades

from the sky

a crow calls

Thanks for reading!

Peace!

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About El Norto

I write haiku. This is my haiku journal.
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2 Responses to haiku two seven zero.

  1. The last one is the best!

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