haiku two two three.

Hello all!

Uh, oh nothing.

a cool breeze

in the old mans window

the street light dies

Thanks for reading!



About El Norto

I write haiku. This is my haiku journal.
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2 Responses to haiku two two three.

  1. Steven Myers says:

    i’ve never read the word “nothing”
    and anticipated so much something.
    maybe it’s because you added, “uh, oh”
    and then in 12 words and 3 images,
    you give life to an entire world that we can dream or nightmare about.

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