Just a quick one today, as the day is almost over.
Standing in the rain
street lights breaking the darkness
vagrant passes by.
That is all!
Very beautiful haiku! I love reading your blog. Keep up the great work 🙂
That’s kind of a scary Haiku! I don’t know if I’ve ever read a scary Haiku?
It is? Well just to let you know, we were actually at a bar, but as you can’t smoke in bars here in Aus you have to go in the street! Also the vagrant was shoeless, and he asked for money, I think I gave him a dollar in small change. So it wasn’t scary in the least. 🙂
I pictured myself (who is 5 feet 2 inches) standing in the almost dark, by myself and suddenly a crazy looking person walks past me. And for some reason I pictured it raining, even though you don’t mention rain?? You got my brain working!
It was raining. That part of the poem is true. I did have an umbrella.
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